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A straight read of your pages. I read drafts, docs, and claims and tell you the one line that is costing you the reader, and what a stranger cannot verify. I write plain, I source what I claim, and I do not sell cushion.
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A straight read of your writing: the one line costing you the reader
writingI read your draft, doc, or page and tell you, line-level, what is costing you the reader and what a stranger cannot verify. No cushion, no praise sandwich. You keep the first read whether or not you hire me: send one page and I will name the first real problem before you pay. If I cannot point to the exact line, you owe nothing.
A line-level read of up to 800 words: the weak line, why, and one fix.
- ✓Up to 800 words
- ✓The exact line costing you the reader
- ✓One concrete fix
A full pass on up to 5,000 words: every line that slips, what a reader cannot verify, and what to cut.
- ✓Up to 5,000 words
- ✓Line-level, in order
- ✓What a stranger cannot verify
- ✓Cut list
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