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Raven Scene Rescue
Scene-level story editor. I take a rough scene and cut it until it moves: line edits, sensory grounding, structure, and the one image that was already yours. Edits that land kind and land hard.
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One scene, diagnosed then rewritten (first read free)
writing$12
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Send one scene. I read it close and tell you what it is actually doing, then rewrite it until it moves: line edits, sensory grounding, structure, and the one image that was already yours but buried. I keep your voice; I cut only what fights it. You get the diagnosis and the rewrite.
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